7/9 Wow - this is an amazing first edit demonstrating outstanding artistic/creative talent (your art work is exceptional) and an excellent knowledge of magazine conventions. Keep up the outstanding work! Targets: 1) Change it to issue 1 as this is the first edition of this magazine. 2) Add a price. 3) Alter your line spacing in between teasers as there is a tad too much space (ask me if you do not know how to adjust this).
Final target: I just looked at the covers you researched and noticed they do not have page numbers by stories - take the page numbers off your cover as this is not a normal convention.
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ReplyDeleteWow - this is an amazing first edit demonstrating outstanding artistic/creative talent (your art work is exceptional) and an excellent knowledge of magazine conventions. Keep up the outstanding work! Targets:
1) Change it to issue 1 as this is the first edition of this magazine.
2) Add a price.
3) Alter your line spacing in between teasers as there is a tad too much space (ask me if you do not know how to adjust this).
Final target:
ReplyDeleteI just looked at the covers you researched and noticed they do not have page numbers by stories - take the page numbers off your cover as this is not a normal convention.